Dark Abyss

[Ren Nakamura]

Card Name: Dark Abyss
Card Type: Copper
Card Class: Gate
Attribute: All Attributes
Rp Flair: The field glows two attribute colours, as the field becomes a blend of those two attributes. On the opponent's side of the field, there is a draining sensation that affects everyone on that side.
Effects: 1) Choose 2 Attributes. Those two Attributes gain 200gs and the rest gain 100gs.

2) All of the Opponent's Bakugan throughout the round, while on their side of the field, lose 150/300/450/600gs a turn.

[Grimm(Admin)]

Okay. So its really the dice that I have issues with. That number is A: Insane, what kind of dice are you using. A hexecontahedron. B: In certain cases can just be more work for your opponent and that's frankly rude. I'm not going to knock it though. I just wont approve it till is rewritten.

My idea for the g-power gains involves a double post. But that's my suggestion. Feel free to do one better.

[Ren Nakamura]

The 111-116 using the dice uses attribute symbols. If you go to a slots post and edit it, you see the dice rolled was a 111-116. So I was going to use that to save assigning a certain number to an attribute.


I would set the post up, post it which would make it roll, and then edit in the actual results with those rolled attributes.

[Grimm(Admin)]

Yeah. That is not 2 dice. Please reword the first effect. And whenever you use this card. Please state that you need a second before your opponent post to edit in the result. I will only allow this dice roll if YOU JUST ROLL 1 DIE! State in your effect what number represents which attribute. And just do that. Your dice roll condition is way to complicated for when it can work better when simplified.

[Grimm(Admin)]

Approved