Cold Arrow

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Card Name: Cold Arrow


Card Type: Blue


Card Class: Normal


Attribute: Darkus and Ventus


Rp Flair: This card gives an arrow to your bakugan and bakugan throw this arrow to your opponent

Effects: Changes opponent's all bakugans' attribute and g-power transfer 300/600/600/1200 (note: the higher numbers are based on evolution stage)

[Blaze Hayes]

Again, looks good to me, but both abilities are vague and therefore could cause problems for you later on.

E.g. Ability Negation - Are you negating the last card played on the last turn? A card of your choosing?

You can edit the wording if you wish, but if you are happy with it vague, I'll approve.

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I can negate active cards, can't I?

[Blaze Hayes]

You can, I am just saying that the way it is right now, it is up to interpretation, on the exact target.

Negate an Ability Card. Would allow you to choose what card to negate in the last turn.

Negate the last Ability Card. Would only negate the last card played.

If left vague, it can mean an admin will decide what the vague wording would mean, which could make things harder for you later in brawls.

[Deleted]

I can negate maybe before the last card or I can negate opponent's first played card in the 5th turn, I mean I can negate what ability card ever I want

[Blaze Hayes]

Understood, in this case, a good choice of wording so everyone understands this, would be: Change the attribute of one of your opponent's Bakugan and negate an ability card that has been played this round.

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Edited

[Blaze Hayes]

Better wording, just make sure to say round not game, cause you can't negate a card from a previous round, or a round that has not happened yet. That one would be a bit much, even for admin cards ;D

[Blaze Hayes]

Looks fine to me.